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    dots Submission Name: Prerequisitesdots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    18/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 97/161/101
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 64
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1011



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    dotsPrerequisitesdots
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    I always try to make,
    My time your while,
    Give something to hold on to,
    Make you smile,
    I drew you the dots,
    So please connect them,
    ILU yes, It is I,
    Who have penned them,
    You can twist them,
    Turn them or bend them,
    Any way you will me to,
    I will send them,
    I will use any media,
    Speedily, kindly,
    Email ,
    AETLP90.
    Gmail, If you
    Need me find me,
    AIM, Googletalk,
    See me? line me,
    You google my alias,
    There's my page,
    Eliteskills on the real,
    And there goes My Name,
    No fame no status,
    Except Elite Founder,
    I've been rhere year,
    My style getting sounder,
    Solid I'd like to think
    So girl, check out my page,
    I've got stuff about you,
    I post up today,
    Your on my mind,
    And my mind is on you,
    So check out my writes,
    For any further proof




    Submitted on 2008-03-12 08:14:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey...who is this about??
    | Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by mella | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this , nice rhyme scheme going , kinda juss free-styling it . very cool tho man keep it comming . Btw i'm No Talent check out some of my work sometime , aight
    | Posted on 2008-03-13 00:00:00 | by No Talent | [ Reply to This ]


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