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The girl [Forbidden]


Author: N0shin
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Words: 110
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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The girl [Forbidden]



Four black glass boxes
Four purple scars to deal with
Four places;
Two teardrops;
One life,
Forbidden;
All she's got.

Dusk and dawn;
Full lips and a bruised thigh.
The moves
The hips
The taboo tricks.
Its time to deliver
The love.

And she is the forbidden.

One circle and one more.
Against the same black door.
One mystery.
Black eyes;
Four long years;
Four shadows of Eve's clouds.
One white house;
Three blinking windows.
One girl looking out

And she is the forbidden.

All eyes;
All curves;
All hair
And all her morning lusts.
All memories and a bruised thigh;
All she's got.




Submitted on 2008-03-12 10:17:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This was written well. I'm not sure exactly what it was about, my I loved the way it flowed through my head and the raw emotion. Sorry about not commenting before, I was a little confused and wanted to read it again. Keep up the great work, and I'll keep reading

»Haely«
| Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
  i like the random nature in which u put ur thoughts and visions in this poetry babe...but most of it only u know what u have written about...but dont worry i will PESTRER u until i find out about these thoughts...

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
:)>
-OB
| Posted on 2008-03-13 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]


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