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    dots Submission Name: almost but not quite theredots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 131
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    This is something I wrote sitting in my senior lit class today when my teacher was talking about graduation. It suddenly seemed so close and its seems like its coming so fast now. The poem is about the reactions I saw today and some of what I was feeling.


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    Everyday I hear people
    smiling excitedly and counting down the days
    5, 4 and now 3 months left they say
    Most say it with confidence
    like they know that they're going to do
    Others say it with a sort of exited nervousness
    All thinking of the day that they will be free
    free from their parents
    free from the places that they feel confined
    free from the constant pressure to be perfect
    Excitedly looking forward to the next step
    College, jobs or traveling
    looking towards the future with a feeling of awe and almost but not quite nausea
    wondering what life's going to bring
    now that they are almost but not quite
    high school graduates




    Submitted on 2008-03-12 10:23:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      REally touched the spot, im in the uk in my 1st year but it doesnt seem that far away even now, i bet you are feeling so nervous but then just think of what you have achieved.

    Really enjoyable read
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by Mr R | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice write Pretti! Congratulations to the soon to be grad! You'll find that life after graduation is even better than you'd imagined, and I'm betting you are just the girl who will go far!
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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