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    dots Submission Name: windowsilldots
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    Author: stasisindarknes
    ASL Info:    15/f/vt
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 23/28/27
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 46
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 347



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    dotswindowsilldots
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    i thik that everybody in that head
    has alot of confusion in their room.
    i can't confuse reality enough
    to create a truth.
    i can't accept the sureal enough to
    place my longing in a box by the
    windowsil where it could be
    without you.
    our souls like dynamite
    drawn from a hat




    Submitted on 2008-03-12 21:42:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this overall. Had a fer typos. (ie surreal, think) Overall, I think it reads better with the last two lines omitted. They kind of jarred me. Not sure exactly where you were going with them. But I love the statemnet about being unable to confuse reality enough to make truth.
    | Posted on 2008-03-13 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]



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