surrounded by such beauty
what will become of me?
i fill my once empty canvas
with this divine poetry.
i settle into you body
let it carry me out to sea,
your breasts like waves
crashing over me.
your body is a canvas
of all i could be.
i was in utter shock when i read you age you have an imence talent please dont gove up and heres another little tip post un edited work just raw stuff that give people reading it a better clue as too who you are as a writer soemtimes we post what we think others will like i think you would be surprised i am gonna keep track of your work cause i cant wait to read more good luck
Spellcheck, you missed an r at the end of your. I like the way that in reading this, I went from feeling as though you were referring to the company of a lover to feeling as though you were referring to yourself. I think this was beautifully written with good visual imagery.
Submission Name: sea
