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    dots Submission Name: leave me alonedots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsleave me alonedots
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    just leave me alone
    let me be me
    i just wonna run away with the wind
    just let me be me
    i don't want to live this lie
    so don't make me

    just leave me alone
    i wonna run free
    so just let me be free
    don't get in my way
    i'll hurt you if you do.

    just leave me alone
    and let us run with the tide
    yes don't get in our way
    we will not be stopped
    they wont give you mercy





    Submitted on 2008-03-13 03:47:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmm. the last line. just wondering whose "they"? metaphors of...? Im guessing they actually means "we"? LOl.ok. sorry if my qns seem kinda O.o"
    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]


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