the rain -------------------------------------------
The rain falls and falls as I cry
It helps me survive the pain inside
You left me to fall on my own
And yet I am here to with out you
And I am here alive not dead.
Did you think you could really fool me?
Or was I just your fantasy.
Your dream
Your wish
My nightmare
I lived cause I knew
Knew what you would do
But I don’t understand why
Why you left
Left me alone
But I don’t care
I can move on
Without you
I have my own life to build
And I will do it all
Alone
This was written very well. The flow was a little off, but other than that it was great. I love the second stanza, I can relate to that like perfectly. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading
Submission Name: the rain
