Aww this is really cute! I wish I would have thought of these lyrics! I have a talent show thing I'm going to try out for and if you added some guitar music, this would have been awsome!! Anyway I like the whole you are the sun an I am the night thing! It's so cute(opps now I'm reapeating myself!) i really liked it! keep up the good work :)
Wow. This was truly heartfelt, it's as if you're wanting to scream to your lover that the world is beautiful whether or not you two share a life together - Though it's what you want, a life with that person. I especially like that you spaced out the repetitive "Kiss me" so it didn't become one of those annoying parts of the lyric.