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    dots Submission Name: kiss medots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    16/male/uk
    Elite Ratio:    1.73 - 45/91/55
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 78
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    dotskiss medots
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    Kiss me
    Like you use to do
    And love me
    Like it’s all new
    And listen to the wind
    The stars of the night
    And kiss me

    Kiss me like the morning sun
    And I’ll love till this song is done
    And look at as I say goodbye
    For the last time

    Open your eyes
    And see the world as I do
    Love it
    As if it's your last dream
    And love the nights we share
    And kiss me

    Kiss me like the morning sun
    And I’ll love till this song is done
    And look at as I say goodbye
    For the last time

    You are my sun
    I am your night
    We share it together yeah
    We are the sky
    We are the earth
    Let us be that way
    Forever when you

    Kiss me like the morning sun
    And I’ll love till this song is done
    And look at as I say goodbye
    For the last
    And the final time




    Submitted on 2008-03-13 04:06:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. This was truly heartfelt, it's as if you're wanting to scream to your lover that the world is beautiful whether or not you two share a life together - Though it's what you want, a life with that person. I especially like that you spaced out the repetitive "Kiss me" so it didn't become one of those annoying parts of the lyric.

    I enjoyed this.
    xo

    Mel.
    | Posted on 2008-03-13 00:00:00 | by GorgeousOutrage | [ Reply to This ]


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