this reminds me of those e-mails I get once in awhile where one changes one letter and so on...
this reminds me as well, that language will always remain interesting to me. It is fun to play with, mix around, made to mean, or not at all.
though I almost feel a hint of sarcasm here in the end lines...
almost as if you are making fun of someone and they don't get it... which makes it even funnier in that mean sarcastic way... (just shoot me with that remark... I am sarcastic sensitive it seems).
This is very clever
You showed quite easilly just how screwed up the English language truly is
There is so many different meanings for the same word its no wonder Foreigners have such a hard time mastering the English language
It also makes me realize just how smart we Americans truy are for by the age of 6 say most American children have already mastered it
Great And as I said a Very Clever Write indeed
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
God Bless
Ron
I think it's fun how you used a lot of words that sound almost exactly the same but have different meanings...but as it is it doesn't mean anything all. Maybe you could make only every other line a homophonish line and then use the alternating lines to make the homophones make sense.
Also, in line 4, I think "lift" instead of "lifted" would flow better, just because all the verbs preceding it are only one syllable.
Ooh- I just thought of something. Maybe you could mix up the lines you already have a little. For instance, you could put "I lift a loot" before "I laughed a lot" so the laughing could be in reaction to the loot lifting. Etc. Etc. It would still be pretty goofy but whatever...
I wonder, have you every heard of the Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo... sentence? It's a grammatically correct sentence composed only of the word buffalo (written like seven or eight times). I know there's a Wikipedia article on it if you care at all. I just thought it was interesting and you might enjoy it.
Submission Name: I laughed a lot.
