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    dots Submission Name: In My Dreamsdots

    Author: Spiderwebb123
    Elite Ratio:    4.58 - 22/26/12
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This is a poem that I just came up with one day...it's what was one my mind.

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    dotsIn My Dreamsdots

    I love the way you look at me, deep into my eyes
    I love your deep and peaceful sighs
    I love the way you make me laugh
    I love that you can cry

    I love the way you tell me,
    That everything will be fine
    I love the way you love me
    And how you hold me close

    I love the way you tell me,
    That you love me the most
    I love the things you say to me,
    Each and every day

    I love to hear your laughter,
    Itís great to see your smile
    I love how you say Iím worth it
    Through each and every trial

    I love it when you walk with me
    And hold my hand real tight
    I love the way you love me,
    With all your might

    I love it when you tell me,
    That I am more beautiful each day
    Iím finding that I love you more,
    More than I can say.

    I only wish that you could be
    Here with me right now
    Why canít you be here?
    When I need you

    I know someday Iíll find you
    How happy we will be
    But for now Iíll keep you,
    Forever in my dreams

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