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Author:	MinervaBlu
ASL Info:	17 nowhere
Elite Ratio:	3.63 - 235/228/174
Words:	157

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	139
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	946

Description:
vol. 3 I don't cut anymore, but I know the feelings that cause it. Not my best write, but I love it anyway

CUT

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Deep dark gashes on my soft pale skin
I know I cannot win the battle within
It feels so good, it is so wrong
It;s better than crying all day long
So much pain dwells inside me
No way to make see: I must bleed
I truly wish there was a better way
But sadly, there isn't: nothing I can say
The only way to let them know
Is to let the crimson river flow
They don't know what is inside my mind
Or what I'm thinking about all the time
My sorrow began in earlier years
Soon after, I dried all my tears
They all say I shouldn't cut
I wish I wouldn't but
There's just so much pain
That cutting is the happiness I gain
Every cut, every slice, all the blood
It fills my soul with a roaring flood
Momentary solace is all I ask for
I just can't stand the incessant pain anymore

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  OMG you know what I have never found a way to say all the things that I feel when I cut. Thank you so much for the insight you have from your point of view. I'm trying to stop cutting and I have even told the people who know I cut that I have already stopped but the thing is I just can't stop because it seems like the only release that I have. I really love your poem and I shall read more of your poems.
| Posted on 2008-08-18 00:00:00 | by Rachel Ruff | [ Reply to This ]
  wow this poem is amazing. i really wouldnt change anything. i cut still, ive been doin it for about 5years and i want to stop, but i need it so mych and he makes me feel so much better. well i just wanted to say nice job, and keep it up. im glad u dont cut anymore but if u ever do i wouldnt tell u not to do it, cuz i know how it feels when people tell u that u shouldnt and i hate it...if u really need it then do it but just be careful. well if u ever want to talk, im here. im good at listenin.. be strong and keep up the not cutting. if u get thoes feelings message me and ill try to help..well nice work u are a good writer.

tayla aka sickofhurting u
| Posted on 2008-08-12 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]
  one of the best i have read in a long ass while girl...and just for the info...i used to cut as well until recently...and i stopped for the special one...
and yes "daughter of death" qutting is a bit#$.
i wont say that quitting is better than doing it...and i will be totally honest with u...the poetry was so gud so easy to attach myself to that i just got a taste of all the reasons why i used to cut myself and why i still feel like doing it myself...

YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER...YOU ARE GOING A LONG WAY...NO MATTER WHO SAYS WHAT...AND THIS POETRY HAS STRUCK A MAJOR CHORD IN ME GIRL...CONGRATS ;)
| Posted on 2008-04-03 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
  one of the best i have read in a long ass while girl...and just for the info...i used to cut as well until recently...and i stopped for the special one...the one who commented b4 me...(:P).
and yes "daughter of death" qutting is a bit#$.
i wont say that quitting is better than doing it...and i will be totally honest with u...the poetry was so gud so easy to attach myself to that i just got a taste of all the reasons why i used to cut myself and why i still feel like doing it myself...

YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER...YOU ARE GOING A LONG WAY...NO MATTER WHO SAYS WHAT...AND THIS POETRY HAS STRUCK A MAJOR CHORD IN ME GIRL...CONGRATS ;)
| Posted on 2008-04-03 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
  This one is really good too. And it's a good thing you don't cut anymore. I quitting again for the fifth time, yeah, quitting is a b!tc#.

The poem was well written. You say its not your best, but it's up there somewhere. If not, I don't think I've read any of your best yet.

I love the way the poem is written, its like it just flowed roght out of your head. These are things that thought about while someone is cutting, or thinking about cutting.

I think this was really good and I enjoyed reading it.

Nice Write
~*~katara~*~
| Posted on 2008-04-02 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a good piece...very strong and promising.A lot of feelings and pain..reminds me of a very special friend of mine who would find cutting himself as the only outlet for his anger...keep up the good work.:)
| Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by N0shin | [ Reply to This ]

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