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    dots Submission Name: The Gleaming Moondots
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    Author: garnet4david
    ASL Info:    20/M/Indonesia
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 81/83/58
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 72
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 614



    Description:
       I am studying abroad now, this poetry represents how do i feel when i leave my family. But, i realise that there is no point of regretting it, i just only need to bring grace to my family. This is a simple poetry and a modern style, so you might find the rhyme is not good.


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    dotsThe Gleaming Moondots
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    The gleaming moon,
    It embraces my room.
    Covering the corner of my room.
    It tries to kill my loneliness.

    The autumn breeze,
    It is fiercing through my bone.
    I despise of being alone.
    But, there is nothing can be done.

    The simple curve on my mother's lips.
    The warmest hug of my father.
    The loudest laughter of my brothers.
    I can see nothing now, but black and white.

    Did i regret the path that i chose?
    Do i have to take a step back?
    I just beg the moon,
    please accompany me always.




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