Let it bleed! -------------------------------------------
Just stop!
Your words are nothing more then
The needle pulling the thread stabbing me
Trying to sow the wounds closed
Just leave me be
And let it bleed!
You can't stop it
You just make it worse
Your words stabbing my heart
Just leave me be
And let it bleed!
Just go on with your life
Leave mine to pieces please
I can take care of myself
I did before you came
What makes you think
You really make a difference now?
You can't do anything
Just go on!
The blood will stop
It will soon run out
The pain will be gone
So just leave me be
And let it bleed!
I like it! Especially the repetitive "let it bleed" line. It's a very powerful line for some reason, though I think the poem ended a little too suddenly.
This poem is amazing. It has so much emotion in it, I loved it. I think I like it so much because there are so many times when I feel like this, and I just want to yell out to everyone to just leave me alone.
This has a LOT of imagery in it. I love it. I think the more descriptive a poem is, the better the poem, depending on the topic. This is one of these topics.
This is really well written, and I liked it a lot.
Submission Name: Let it bleed!
