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    dots Submission Name: Hatred for the Haterdots
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    Author: rosesrouges
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 32/42/42
    Words: 308
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       “Hate is too great a burden to bear. It injures the hater more than it injures the hated.”
    - Coretta Scott King


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    i swear.
    i won't hate you.
    because i can't.
    i won't.
    i don't want to be petty.
    but i honestly need to get rid of you like period.
    less sin for you.
    less sin for me.
    you're prolly not reading this because you ain't the reading kind.
    you make me so piss.
    you make me angry.
    but you won't (God forbid) make me hate you.

    you know it's frustrating when you're the one whose feeling hurt,
    but the other party is laughing away.
    selfish.
    sell fish.
    how i wish it was the latter.

    your friends.
    urgh.
    like i said, they don't shave their armpit hairs.
    snobby lil bunch.
    but still, i won't hate you.

    i will punch you when i see you.
    but i won't hate you.
    i will chokeslam you when i meet you.
    but i won't hate you.
    i will scream at the top of my lungs, your name with full of anger,
    but i won't hate you.

    i swear i won't hate you.

    retribution.
    karma.
    but never revenge.
    because revenge isif i hate you.
    but again,
    i won't hate you.
    cos i swear i won't hate you.

    i won't call you names. (except for 'idiot')
    vulgarities make me seem as though i hate you.
    so i won't.

    bahs! you and your friends.
    all richly clad.
    all snooty and snobby.
    all high-class.
    all sarcastic and trying to show off.
    mocking me more than that bird.
    insulting me in away.
    laughing at me in away.
    GOD FORBID-
    FOR ME TO HATE YOU




    Submitted on 2008-03-14 10:08:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. it seems like somethingi would write. it makes you think about everything
    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by Austen jacox | [ Reply to This ]


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