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    dots Submission Name: Harisdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 757
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1240



    Description:
       Contrasting trust with expectations
    What you know can mislead you
    but open up your eyes and see the same
    as you see with eyes shut
    You see the peaking of the truth


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    dotsHarisdots
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    I set you aside from all the rest
    why should I group you all together
    I have it in my mind that you're the best
    why should I think of any other

    Haris take me to Paris
    take me all the around the world if you can try
    Haris tell what that is
    Tell me everything and tell me what I see
    I see Haris

    Ive made a box of happiness
    long before we even met
    You get your own box Ive decided
    you gave more happiness than one could get

    Haris, please take me to Paris
    hold me all day in your arms if you can try
    Oh Haris, show me where 'there' is
    Show me all the care and love you have for me
    I love Haris

    Haris take me to Paris
    take me all the around the world if you can try
    Haris tell what that is
    Show me everything and tell me what I see
    I see Haris

    Haris, please take me to Paris
    hold me all day in your arms if you can try
    Oh Haris, show me where 'there' is
    Show me all the care and love you have for me
    I love Haris
    I love Haris...
    Oh, oh Haris

    I love you




    Submitted on 2008-03-14 10:09:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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