World Peace is Fiction -------------------------------------------
We are perfect- are we not?
We are crafted to think and to feel.
To please and to hurt.
To live and to kill.
Our perfections have created a world to which horror thrives and the children live in such morbid conefinment.
What are they?
The insanity cruel ideology to oppose the PEACE.
Make peace, not WAR.
Unfortunately Miss Universe, your hope for World Peace will never emerge in such pandemonium.
Something you want but can't get.
Something you get but it hurts.
The perilous adventure to which the heart untwine.
A fairy-tale- in my opinion.
A cartoon you just hate.
The freedom you can't make.
The thing that makes the world go round.
The abhorrence of such intense feeling to make a once sane person insane.
A slapdash post by mere coincidence.
A lackluster post.
A wonderful individual took time to read my crappy post.
I very much liked this. I liked the way you set a line of a single word at the top of each stanza, and then went in, filling out it's concept. I personally haven't seen many like this. And I like that you put powerpuff girls in there under hate. It takes the poem from feeling too generalized, to feeling like a peek inside your head. (not to mention that I loathe that show). And I love the ending of the stanza under perfect. It really does go to show that taking perfectionism to extremes always ends badly, it immdeiately left me thinking of Hitler. I very much liked the depth, wording and formatting overall.