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    dots Submission Name: Wanderdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 517
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 354



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       Spontaneous Friday! I encourage everyone to take a run through their imagination and spend a day creating and dreaming and sending out lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share


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    dotsWanderdots
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    Come and walk with me
    my mind is a
    wander
    a
    wonder
    The rains glisten
    the fields
    a
    green
    a
    glow
    Colors are
    rainbows
    of
    creation
    taking
    the
    shape
    of
    flowers
    a
    bloom
    a
    bud
    a
    life




    Submitted on 2008-03-14 11:37:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      odd, though yet, neat, nifty, gnarly and pretty darn good all around.... bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-31 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      A nature walk with you and your pen is always delightful! I'm eagerly waiting for all the bulbs to send their little green sprouts above the brown that surrounding us right now. Spring is coming; spring is coming SOON! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This was great, Tiffany! A trip off the beaten path, and a discovery of the delight of one's own thoughts and the beauty of nature!
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah! Beautiful... Wander into the realms inaccessible.... Dare to leave the trodden path and discover unseen beauties of life,,, Well, i agree, sometimes we should wander too,,, who knows it may draw a new path for others,,, wandering may take us to destinations that are often not marked on maps.

    This piece is really very thought-provokong.

    Thanks for the inspiration my dear Epiphany :)
    | Posted on 2008-03-15 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      ha! this was very good! very simple and to the point with a very good positive message, and i thank you! it's always nice to find someone so CONSISTANTLY POSITIVE as you
    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by scissorhands | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry I can't live up this Friday,sorry. Good piece.
    XI
    | Posted on 2008-03-14 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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