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    dots Submission Name: try medots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    16/male/uk
    Elite Ratio:    1.73 - 45/91/55
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 74
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    Bytes: 319



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    so you want to hurt me.
    i'd giggle but. i hate funny

    i just have one thing to say to you....
    try me

    do you think it would be that easy to beat me up.
    i don't think so.

    i have had the practice
    to defend myself for years on end.




    Submitted on 2008-03-14 11:38:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "do you think it would be that easy to beat me up."
    i like how its not phrased as a question. we've all felt this way at one point or another. good write.
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by dorianrydell | [ Reply to This ]


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