this poem rocks...the love is pure and sweet...people think that love is superfical and alot of times that is all it really turns out to be...but when you love someone for such a small detail there is so much more love to come...the imagry in the is amazing and i love the way you write...keep it up!!!
I like it, isn't love a funny thing....I guess it's not a thing it's a feeling. Love is probably the most difficult "thing" to explain because there is nothing concrete about it, it really is a feeling......maybe thats why there is so many poems written about it,
I don't know but you did a great job describing your love,
Woooooow!!! This one sounds so great. It is well-written and it expresses all the feelings that one feel when he/she fall in love. I liked the whole poem and specially this part:
" Spreading sweet poison over me
By caressing me lenity
Those smooth lips?
Waking hidden desires so unknown
Makes me release a soundless moan
That seductive smile?
While my gaze travels through your angelic face
You whisper soft words few
I realise it is that alluring voice with grace
That makes me love you!!!! "
Well done. Nice images; describing love like a sweet poison, his seductive smile and his angelic face. Nice expressions..
Submission Name: What makes me love you
