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    dots Submission Name: He didn't call tonightdots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    15/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/19/23
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 57
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    dotsHe didn't call tonightdots
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    He didn't call tonight
    maybe he had a long day
    and went to sleep on his cumfy bed
    or maybe he's taking a shower
    relaxing on a hot tub of water

    He didn't call tonight
    perhaps he simply forgot
    busy watching a ball game tonight
    maybe he's delayed doing homework
    teachers packed us for the night

    He didn't call tonight
    maybe he has buissness to take care of
    family issues to resolve
    or maybe he's busy eating food
    something he loves to do

    He didn't call tonight
    perhaps he's talking to someone else
    it ain't his responsibility to call me after all
    im just a simple friend who fell to hard
    so why am i stressin so damn much?




    Submitted on 2008-03-15 16:59:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. The poem kinda relates to how i feel/felt. The feeling of hoping so much (for him to call or whatever) honestly, sucks. I like the way the poem covers alot of different scenarios- to what he might be doing. Really cool ( :
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]



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