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    dots Submission Name: Self-betraying Heartdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       November 2007


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    dotsSelf-betraying Heartdots
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    I hold you close to me,
    forgetting promises of restraint.
    I want only your love,
    forgetting friendship as my limit.
    I need only your love,
    It sustains me for life.
    I want only your touch,
    our fingers intertwined.
    I don't know why I love you,
    only that it is true.
    Drunken splender of our love,
    regret is soon to be.
    I need your love,
    I know it is mine.
    I need your touch,
    but your are just out of reach.
    My fingertips rest above you,
    gently brushing your lips.
    Restraint is my frustration,
    love is my substenance.
    You are mine,
    I am yours.
    No matter what life throws,
    I will love your for life.




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