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    dots Submission Name: Vampyr's Lovedots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       December 2007


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    dotsVampyr's Lovedots
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    My marble skin shows no warmth.
    My ancient skin feels no cold.
    I come from a time,
    centuries old.
    Rising at dusk
    sleeping through dawn
    Feeding on blood,
    to the metallic tast I'm drawn
    Shrivelled is my heart
    black is my soul
    My marble skin feels no warmth,
    My ancient skin is so cold
    I live in this time
    but years old
    Living at dusk
    Dieing at dawn
    feeding on love
    to you I'm drawn
    overflowing is my heart,
    torn is my soul




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