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    dots Submission Name: Guardiandots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       December 2007


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    dotsGuardiandots
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    Here to hold you close,
    save you from the world.
    Take my hand and follow me,
    I'll lead you down the path.

    Save you from the world,
    it's dangers to avoid.
    Your pillar of strength,
    never will I fall.

    Take my hand and follow me,
    do not be afraid.
    This world is dark and dangerous,
    but I will keep you safe.

    I'll lead you down the path,
    fear not to walk with me.





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