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    dots Submission Name: Twisted.truths&narrow[lies]dots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 345
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       December 2007


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    ^~^


    I am appalled at [myself]
    F N
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    LL
    in your lust&traps
    seduced by your
    twisted.truths&narrow[lies]
    dragged Down into you
    &I canít understand
    no emotion about your[my]
    twisted.truths&narrow[lies]

    Loving.hating {myself}
    my openness with you
    caught in the.world
    [its] twisted.truths&narrow[lies]

    belonging with (you)
    who belongs with me
    lost! in my own
    twisted.truths&narrow[lies]


    ^~^

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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, I am certain I know who this is for, although my lips will remain sealed in the matter. This was always a favorite one of my poems although I never spoke about it. It is one that does not need to be spoken about for it is understood. Rare to see that in poetry now.

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    | Posted on 2008-09-15 00:00:00 | by augustcranes | [ Reply to This ]


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