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    dots Submission Name: lovedots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       december 2007


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    dotslovedots
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    A futile existance,
    killing the soul.
    Wasting lives,
    ripping out hearts whole.




    Submitted on 2008-03-15 19:41:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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