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    dots Submission Name: Regretdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       December 2007


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    dotsRegretdots
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    I walked into it,
    the trap of our love.
    I knew the risks,
    yet blinded I was.
    I thought I was strong,
    now I feel Death's drum.
    I knew who she would choose,
    I forsaw the outcome.
    Now I am empty,
    and she doesn't understand.
    I am the one to blame,
    but at least she has him.




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