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    dots Submission Name: Internal Wardots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       December 2007


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    dotsInternal Wardots
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    The darkness and light
    warring inside.
    The battle rages fierce,
    there is nowhere to hide.

    Fighting for control,
    fighting for life.
    Neither will give up,
    and lose this internal strife.

    The final battle is here,
    full power on both sides.
    Never were they so fierce,
    never in such chaos abides.

    This is it,
    fighting for all.
    Winner gains life,
    loser is destroyed.
    Who will rise,
    above all else?
    Who shall die,
    eternity without rest?

    Where to go.
    Who will know
    how to win,
    and live again

    The darkness and light,
    fighting for control.
    The final battle is here,
    this is it.
    Who will rise,
    and who now dies?




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