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    dots Submission Name: Depressiondots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       December 2007


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    dotsDepressiondots
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    I sit watching the crimson necter flow
    as the darkness of Hell calls my name.
    This time I embrace the empty pain
    and cry that lost love has left me maimed.




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