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    dots Submission Name: Forceddots

    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 31
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       December 2007

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    You are still
    in excruciating pain,
    destroyed by the things
    the evil men did.
    Crying alone.
    never feeling the sweet rain,
    sleeping eyes open,
    fearing dreams on their lids.

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