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    dots Submission Name: Nightmaredots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       December 2007


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    dotsNightmaredots
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    Burning, slashing, darkness unbound.
    Living, breathing, wishing for death.
    Torture, beatings, blood-curdling sound.
    Never waking up, final breath.




    Submitted on 2008-03-15 19:52:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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