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    dots Submission Name: The Reapingdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       January 2008


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    dotsThe Reapingdots
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    I sowed the seeds of pain within,
    her love helped them grow to fruition,
    I harvest all I have sown,
    I find that I am but deluded.

    Her love helped them grow to fruition,
    full and sweet within my heart.
    They weigh me down with much sorrow,
    and regret of what never was.

    I harvest all I have sown,
    reaping saddness and pain.
    I wish for that which should not be,
    and hate all I have done.

    I find that I am but deluded,
    my thoughts clouded and mind in the dark.
    They are my only solace and refuge,
    these many fruits of sweet, sweet pain.




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      You're really artistic and imaginative. I like your work very much so. I wish I had your talent. My peoms are blah. Your poems are magnificent works of art and belong in books. I could feel the emotion in this one. Well represented.
    | Posted on 2008-03-17 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]


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