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    dots Submission Name: (Love)Lostdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 133/159/91
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       March 2008


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    dots(Love)Lostdots
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    what I(now)did have
    is(locked)lost in a sea
    of(love)despair.
    && what I de.sire
    (Is)can.not.be mine
    ne-ver have.I needed
    You as.much as now
    &I weep for my love(found)lost
    she.is(everything)lost to me
    forevermore




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