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    dots Submission Name: Ndots
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    Author: Solomon Disease
    ASL Info:    101, male, earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 284/292/104
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    dotsNdots
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    I have a black and white picture of you in my pocket
    The one in which you are smiling very quietly
    And your eyes look so mysterious
    Your face looks warm
    You look beautiful

    I look at it a thousand times a day
    I miss you





    Submitted on 2008-03-15 23:37:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      lol, this reminds me of one of those tacky puppy dog pictures with the huge watery eyes. Get over that hoe.
    | Posted on 2009-04-09 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]
      Something nice and sweet from a guy! I hope she can see it...Oh what a lucky one she is at that!
    | Posted on 2008-08-05 00:00:00 | by mon28 | [ Reply to This ]
      awww, how sweet, I wish I had that kind of sweetness directed towards me. This was a great display of affection and I bet she doesn't know about it at all.
    | Posted on 2008-07-06 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      short sweet and too the point how amaing so much emotion conveyed in jsut a few lines that takes more talent if you ask me good write keep it up ...
    | Posted on 2008-03-16 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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