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    dots Submission Name: Family Treedots
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    Author: Magnolia Steele
    ASL Info:    30/female/Northwest CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 2491/1823/230
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
    Total Views: 83
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1335



    Description:
       A new poem I wrote today. A bit of my family history.


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    dotsFamily Treedots
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    A bad apple, I fell
    from the ancient tree,
    without warning.
    A quiet thud upon hellish plains, detached
    from the familiar limbs
    that held me
    in limbo for so long.
    My silent decay,
    a sweet aroma
    of the atrophy of my being,
    intoxicated my demise,
    and left me in a state of delirium.
    Inside out,
    I began to rot and fill with
    wormholes that led
    me on an internal journey of myself...
    of what was left of me,
    beyond the core and to
    a portal of what I was meant to be.
    Hollowed and bruised,
    I laid listless
    as the winter snow
    sprinkled on me,
    numbing me to the idea of solitude.
    I slumbered for some time
    in my white catacomb,
    my ice castle.
    I awakened to find myself
    in the belly of the earth once more.
    A wooden tapestry of roots
    surrounded me...but I belong to
    each of them as well as none of them now.
    Upon this realization,
    Mother Earth released me from her care,
    and suddenly I found myself
    above with the living once more,
    not as a near corpse,
    but a viable being
    that had few roots of my own to spare,
    ready to extend
    my boundaries in this world.




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