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    dots Submission Name: 1916dots
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    Author: Senna27NZ
    ASL Info:    29/m/New Zealand-UK
    Elite Ratio:    5.43 - 251/183/26
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Misc/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 107
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 495



    Description:
       Accidentally deleted, apologies to those that had commented, your words not lost on me however.

    Here is the re-worked poem. Thankyou for your time.


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    Think of those fallen foes - those who paid the cost
    For battles bravely won, in wars later lost
    Casualties of circumstance, confounded by cruel Fate
    Short lives accursed by unquenched thirst the future cannot sate
    Winds blow cold on fallen souls that recall summer breeze
    Where once flags flew proud, half-mast rags concede defeat
    Confined to yesterday, they now rest beneath French soil
    Remember our forefathers: doubters, cowards, heroes all




    Submitted on 2008-03-16 19:20:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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