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    dots Submission Name: Happy doubts and wishes to be convinced by Jamii Ndots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 705
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 431



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    dotsHappy doubts and wishes to be convinced by Jamii Ndots
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    This is what you accept
    Remain a secret from yourself
    If the end you still announce
    to marry for love, no one must know

    If you change your mind
    If you`care for him
    He will still be there
    Protected from unhappiness

    Every day counts
    at 16 or at 62
    one will always know
    that happiness doubts and
    wishes to be convinced





    Submitted on 2008-03-17 00:35:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "one will always know that happiness doubts and wishes to be convinced"

    I like that line a lot... It's got me all thinking...
    Damn you!!! Hahaha!
    *smells like burnt rubber in here*
    I think I'm inspired to go write something now.

    Oh, you can just make edits to the actual poem under Edit/Delete- you don't have to make the corrections in a comment like that...

    *love & light*

    -Ceyx
    | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]
      Corrections:

    *If this is what you accept...

    *If in the end you still announce...
    | Posted on 2008-03-17 00:00:00 | by lolavie | [ Reply to This ]


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