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    dots Submission Name: Life Judgement by Ryuichi Minaminodots
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    Author: Shikida
    ASL Info:    19/USA
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 342
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 713
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2246



    Description:
       A song about life, how we judge people for there youth issues and how they dress/look when In reality they might be the people to save our lifes onday


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    dotsLife Judgement by Ryuichi Minaminodots
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    LIFE

    People look at A punk
    With his blue spiked hair pierced ears, eye brows and tongue
    Baggy shirt with the logo
    For some rock band
    Obscene lyrics
    Parents would never understand
    Pants three sizes too big
    Hanging off his waist
    Sneakers dirty and falling apart
    He doesn’t really fit it
    He doesn’t really try
    ‘Cause he doesn’t really
    Give a damn

    They say when they see him
    “They’d better watch that one”
    He’s the kind of kid you’d expect to see
    Being lead away by the police
    “Cause he was caught holding a pound of weed”


    People look at a “normal” kid
    With his perfect blonde hair
    Perfect blue eyes
    Fifty dollar shirt
    Seventy dollar jeans
    Hundred and ten dollar shoes


    They say when they see him
    'Now that’s a…Good boy”
    'Cause he make the grades
    'Cause he has good parents
    Showing off the perfect life
    He might be a doctor when he grows up
    But he’s gonna amount to something big

    When in reality cold unforgiving reality
    He’s gonna end up
    Teenage father
    Drug addict
    High School drop out
    Killed in a car accident


    You know why?
    ‘Cause he fit in
    ‘Cause he tried
    'Cause he cared what others thought of him
    He was willing to go
    As far as they wanted
    When he finally did
    Look what it got him
    A body bag
    And a funeral service


    Three years later
    That punk with the Spiked hair
    Is finishing his second year of collage
    Now he making the grades
    He’s got good friends
    And parents that care
    He’s got the prefect life


    Guess What?
    He might be a doctor
    But he’s gonna amount to something big.

    *V2* Think about it…
    *V3* How true is this…
    *V1* There’s only one word to describe it…

    *Pause and sudden stop in music*

    *Everyone* LIFE!
    THE END






    Submitted on 2008-03-17 13:34:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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