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    Author: Shikida
    ASL Info:    19/USA
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 279
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 577
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1940



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    By:
    Ryuichi Minamino


    *No lights: Speak*
    I guess Iím lost after all (5 second pause)
    Please someone hear my callÖ

    *Curtains roll up: Keyboard intro begins.*

    (Slow and passionate)
    Chorus x2: Ta! Su! Ki! Ti!
    Please help me
    Help me
    Ta! Su! Ki! Ti!
    Please help me friend

    (soft)
    Iím all alone Ť
    In the woods
    Iíve never been here before
    Iíve lost my way awhile back
    (Energetic increase with each word)
    Iíll yell until Iím sore Ť

    *Chorus: Kind of Hyper and loud. 2nd time
    Add in 2nd Vocal*

    (Medium-Loud and Medium hyper)
    Its been 3 days
    Since Iíve seen
    Something that looks like a trail
    Iím not sure
    Of anything
    (Get louder with each word w/vocal 2 )
    Why donít I just sail?

    *Chorus: Hyper Loud vocal 1&2. 2nd time add in vocal 3)




    (Hyper)
    A total of 6 days
    And Iím
    Still all alone
    I canít remember
    Anything about
    (Increase loud all 3Vocals)
    Why Iíve gone!

    *Chorus: Give it your all! All 3 vocals*

    (soft)
    12 days (pause)
    And Iím still here
    (Little energetic)
    I fear this maybe my end
    And still no word of anyone
    (Hyper and loud)
    Iíll give it one more try my friend!

    *Chorus: X1:Vocal 1-Loud, Vocal 2- Medium, Vocal 3-soft*
    X2: V1-Medium, V2- Soft
    X3: V1-soft

    (soft, slow, sad)
    And now
    Iím still alone
    Is this my end?

    *Curtains fall down: Only V1 is left*

    (Talks to crowd)
    So I beg youÖ
    (Falls to Knees)
    PleaseÖHelpÖMe
    (Falls sprawled out on the floor)

    THE END




    Submitted on 2008-03-17 13:55:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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