I like this, but I cant explain why. Thus, making this comment more complicated then I expected/intended. I have had this feeling and every now and then it comes back. I think that sometimes the people that are looking cant see because they arent necessarily looking for you, they are looking for what they want to see or what they thought they had seen and because it was never there, or no longer is...whats evident becomes invisible. At first glance I was struck at how small the poem was, but when I read it I thought that the simplicity helped add to the emptiness that the poem conveys.
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