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    dots Submission Name: The wrong way by Jamii Nesbittdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe wrong way by Jamii Nesbittdots
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    ...the crash
    becomes a softening smoldering of ash,
    the road
    becomes a long, long way off from home
    alone am I
    I am alone
    and so far from home
    am I




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