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Life in Eyes


Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Life in Eyes




A gleaming feature on our face,
Mirror to our soul,
Doorway to our heart,
Profundity of emotions seen in this deep sea,
A nexus between eyes and soul.

Enticing eyes augment the charms of a damsel,
Passion of love seen through eyes,
Heart expresses through eyes,
When words fail eyes speak,
Eyes speak vehemently.

Dreams are born in eyes
And accomplished in Life.
While dreaming our eyes are closed
But mind’s eyes wide open
And takes us away to impeccable world.

Eyes are Almighty’s benevolence,
His special gift,
Divine blessing on us
To gaze at His Creation
And cherish the glories of His World.





Submitted on 2008-03-18 10:53:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  They say the eyes are "the windows to the soul". And so it is that we look to the eyes to comprehend expression, and estimate the sincerity of those we are engaged with.

God put immense beauty in nature and in the world, and gave us excellent binocular visison to see it with.

Nice work Ram! The eyes have it!!!
| Posted on 2011-02-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this very much.. it seems somewhat Religious in a sense since it says His and He alot in it but well written.
| Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]


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