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    dots Submission Name: Life in Eyesdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 264/107/52
    Words: 284
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots Life in Eyesdots
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    A gleaming feature on our face,
    Mirror to our soul,
    Doorway to our heart,
    Profundity of emotions seen in this deep sea,
    A nexus between eyes and soul.

    Enticing eyes augment the charms of a damsel,
    Passion of love seen through eyes,
    Heart expresses through eyes,
    When words fail eyes speak,
    Eyes speak vehemently.

    Dreams are born in eyes
    And accomplished in Life.
    While dreaming our eyes are closed
    But mind’s eyes wide open
    And takes us away to impeccable world.

    Eyes are Almighty’s benevolence,
    His special gift,
    Divine blessing on us
    To gaze at His Creation
    And cherish the glories of His World.





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      They say the eyes are "the windows to the soul". And so it is that we look to the eyes to comprehend expression, and estimate the sincerity of those we are engaged with.

    God put immense beauty in nature and in the world, and gave us excellent binocular visison to see it with.

    Nice work Ram! The eyes have it!!!
    | Posted on 2011-02-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this very much.. it seems somewhat Religious in a sense since it says His and He alot in it but well written.
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]


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