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    dots Submission Name: Because I don'tdots

    Author: hawkeye
    ASL Info:    20/Female/Kentucky
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 9/18/10
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsBecause I don'tdots

    I want to scream!!
    You piss me off.
    I do my best,
    and yet its not good enough.
    What can I say to get you off my back?
    I want to leave this inferno.
    What will it take?
    It will take my life and my soul.
    I want to leave here never to return.
    I hate being in the same room as you,
    but yet you can't see that.
    You have to be here
    and so do I.
    I don't really see why.
    They stuck me here with you,
    what else can I say?
    Now you see why,
    I give you that blank stare.
    If you have a problem,
    you can take it up with someone who cares.
    Because I don't

    Submitted on 2008-03-18 12:23:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ah, I get the feeling of being trapped on a deserted island with someone I can't stand! (Mrs. Schlumpnaggle, my 7th grade teacher! Good heavens, man, a nightmare!) very nicely done poem... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      i could feel you're emotion and anger here.. very nicely done
    | Posted on 2008-03-18 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]

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