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    dots Submission Name: Freedots
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    Author: KimmyMim
    ASL Info:    47 Female New England
    Elite Ratio:    4.73 - 170/211/66
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Happy
    Total Views: 101
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    dotsFreedots
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    Keep your sanity
    in a little white box
    just within reach
    behind the hazy shadows
    of a morning summer sun.

    When no one is looking, and
    you find the need to unravel...
    give a gentle tug
    on the tattered ribbon
    that holds you all inside
    ...and just let yourself go!




    Submitted on 2008-03-18 13:59:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      In this poem, I envisioned a whimsical scene of a typically serious adult or teenager leaping into the summer air after a long and difficult day. It really is a cute poem and it sounds very nice off the tongue.

    I also for some reason picture a top; the tops where you either pull a string to get it going or ones with ripcords.
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Stygian | [ Reply to This ]


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