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    dots Submission Name: ''the window''dots
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    Author: crazyphreshone
    ASL Info:    31/M/NewYork
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 66/69/29
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 64
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 731



    Description:
       this actually portrays many angles and perspectives into a window...or a mind,a soul....


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    dots''the window''dots
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    i gently close my eyes,
    and escape into the reccesses
    of my mind,
    cascading,yet
    softly fading,
    i can't recall
    what i was saying...
    yet find myself
    inside the eyes of those hating,
    you never know
    what you betray,
    through the reflection
    of your eyes periphery,
    jealousy and envy
    are the roots of hate,
    you must study the language
    before you pronunciate.

    clever still,
    is a mind fueled by need,
    feed it what it wants,
    and it is quickly decieved.

    shrouding motives and intentions
    with generosity,
    silently and quietly
    flexing your superiority...




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