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    dots Submission Name: the petals of your mouthdots

    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe petals of your mouthdots

    hello red noon,
    the light of forever
    is inside you
    where the petals of your mouths corona
    watch the days pass into the heat of nothing.

    i blew past the mirror
    where i became you.
    the place where the dark of your eyes
    finds no other reason to love
    than to pass the time.

    yet deeper still,
    the reality of romance becomes your hammer,
    beating on the interior of your clammed up heart.

    these patterns form
    that we seem to follow into dreams
    like waking is,
    like waking is not
    where the words are lost
    to describe something.

    iíve spoken stories of suitcases
    & missing trees
    where the beginning was,
    where it is not
    & will be again & again
    like aching muscles
    breed a fever inside us.

    i hold back
    the fist of always
    away from the face of heaven
    in retreat.

    like god says,
    "iíve died along the way
    in knowing you."

    iíll tie back my witfull tongue,
    slide back into the coming night
    & remember what it was like
    to be here now.
    are we all damaged from the start
    or are these just creatures
    that weíve picked up along the way?

    iíve known nothing
    but these curses
    made of years.
    this electricity
    that pops this mortal coil to waken.
    & i love the movement of everything
    inside me.

    Submitted on 2008-03-18 23:36:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow..this is really good...your paint a good mental image throughout the poem....great job...sorry i can;t say more...my minds not all here this morning....
    | Posted on 2008-03-19 00:00:00 | by never_far_away | [ Reply to This ]

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