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    dots Submission Name: A Grave Mishappeningdots
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    Author: Stygian
    ASL Info:    16/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 61/75/37
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Haiku/Comedy
    Total Views: 135
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    Bytes: 71



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    dotsA Grave Mishappeningdots
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    to somnambulate
    upon a grand galleon
    is to walk the plank




    Submitted on 2008-03-19 08:47:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ooo- somnambulate. Good word. Ate up the majority of the syllable count too! I had to look it up, never heard it before...
    I had to sound it out- galeón, to make sure it was three syllables... It is, of course- but the way I said it, without proper enunciation, the first time was only two...
    So- a technically perfect Haiku! !YaY! Awesome word usage too!
    Sleep-plank-walking...
    There is a rude awakening!

    *love & light*

    -Ceyx
    | Posted on 2008-03-27 00:00:00 | by Ceyx | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, this is quite funny, indeed, and almost a haiku as well... I liked it muchly... bravo... bravo... bravo... michael ...
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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