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    dots Submission Name: I hate the mediadots

    Author: rosesrouges
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 32/42/42
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       I would have continued more but i though i just put the main thoughts into it. Spelling mistakes to be ignored. Ive got typo-ids. LOL.

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    dotsI hate the mediadots

    I find it horribly ironic
    How we claim to despise the liars
    But here we are in our own frolics,
    Blaming the innocent accused to ceased the murderer's one desire

    The momentum of television
    The impetus radio
    The nature of real beauty is in circumsision
    Just like the beat of an untune stereo

    The girls are dying
    Fighting to death to be thin
    The racist are cheering
    For discrimination seems to be their pleasures of sin

    We all refused the propaganda
    Maybe it's because we are in denial
    We are all so confuse with the aunthentic agenda
    Never noticing the death of the children through a tyrant's trial

    The children are crying from the other side
    We can't hear. We can't see.
    The predisposition of the media seems to hide;
    The most improtant function of our so exposed decree.

    Submitted on 2008-03-19 09:30:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So true. The media is the most destructive thing is this country; nay the world, today. You have captured everything very wonderfully. from anorexia to shock radio, racism, children dying throughout the world. Very nice write. I also believe it is very ironic that no one has the guts, as they did back in the revolution to point out to government through whatever means necessary that there is a problem that needs to be dealt with not pushed aside to grow with everything else that's wrong in this world. You brought out a lot of emotion in me, and that's a sign of a very powerful poem. Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2008-03-19 00:00:00 | by chrls | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written, this is my first comment in a long time so I'm gonna try and make it a s accurate as I can... As i said love the idea, in a few areas some simple words could be omitted to make the flow better throughout the whole piece... but as I said it was well written though...dunno how come it hasn't got a comment yet but I'll give it the first.

    | Posted on 2008-03-19 00:00:00 | by b_v_grant | [ Reply to This ]

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