So true. The media is the most destructive thing is this country; nay the world, today. You have captured everything very wonderfully. from anorexia to shock radio, racism, children dying throughout the world. Very nice write. I also believe it is very ironic that no one has the guts, as they did back in the revolution to point out to government through whatever means necessary that there is a problem that needs to be dealt with not pushed aside to grow with everything else that's wrong in this world. You brought out a lot of emotion in me, and that's a sign of a very powerful poem. Keep up the good work.
Very well written, this is my first comment in a long time so I'm gonna try and make it a s accurate as I can... As i said love the idea, in a few areas some simple words could be omitted to make the flow better throughout the whole piece... but as I said it was well written though...dunno how come it hasn't got a comment yet but I'll give it the first.