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    dots Submission Name: addicted to youdots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 354
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 557
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1989



    Description:
       It's kind of a long song.

    I used songs like

    No air- Jordin Sparks
    Bleeding Love- Leona Lewis
    Sorry- Buckcherry
    Whatever it takes- Lifehouse
    Addicted to you- Simple Plan

    and I used other bands such as: Aly and Aj, Avril Lavigne, Christina Aguilera, Three days grace, 30 seconds to mars, meatloaf, armor for sleep, the click five, to inspirie me I also used some of my own stuff to complete it.


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    dotsaddicted to youdots
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    It all makes sense to you, youíre the perfect person
    But still I hear you say that you want to end your life today
    Losing you is like living in a world with no air
    So how am I suppose to breathe without you?

    ©
    I want you so much that I just canít resist you
    And Iím doing everything to keep you by my side
    Never felt like I needed a man, to comfort me
    But now Iím addicted to you
    Oh Iím addicted to you

    In my dreams, in my sleep, infatuation turns into disease
    I never thought Iíd be in love to someone like you.
    I can see my paradise on the dashboard light
    Iím so close yet I'm so far away

    ©
    I want you so much that I just canít resist you
    And Iím doing everything to keep you by my side
    Never felt like I needed a man, to comfort me
    Oh Hell Iím addicted to you

    Nothing ever comes out right
    I stuck around just for this senseless fighting
    One day we'll get sick of this mindless beating
    We'll lie just to get away

    ©
    I want you so much that I just canít resist you
    And Iím doing everything to keep you by my side
    Never felt like I needed a man, to comfort me in my life
    But now damn if I ainít addicted to you
    Oh Damn I'm addicted to you

    Why canít I keep my eyes off you?
    Even now with this other girl
    Go ahead and say her name, even though it makes me feel this way
    Talk about that girl who pushed me away

    I want you so much that I just canít resist you
    I love you so much that I just can't forget you

    You cut me open with every word you speak
    Do you expect me to live with just me
    Oh Iím sorry for telling you the truth
    Oh baby I'm sorry for ever loving you (ever loving you)
    Oh baby I'm sorry for ever loving you




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