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    dots Submission Name: what tonight seemed so realdots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    15/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/19/23
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 80
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    dotswhat tonight seemed so realdots
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    another night spend arguing
    on stuff that ain't important
    feeling the hot tears rising
    trying to change the subject
    but once you get started
    its impossible to stop it
    trying once again not to cry
    holding my head up high,
    swallowing hard trying to be strong
    and holding my beating heart
    that was being torn inside
    slowly you apologize and
    say it's for the best
    to act like it never happened
    and everything will be ok
    and like a fool i accept you and
    let you hold me tight
    while your warmth burns deep within me
    letting go of all my pains and fears
    wanting tomorow never to reveal
    what tonight came so close to being real




    Submitted on 2008-03-19 15:43:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You sound like a strong girl, if this guy is worth it, you are doing the right thing, just make sure you are.
    You are very young and I am sure there are plenty more chances at love for you, so don't put yourself through hurt unless you truly belive in your partner..

    Great write, nice style and thought process..

    Love
    Me
    | Posted on 2008-03-19 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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