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    dots Submission Name: It comes arounddots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsIt comes arounddots
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    All situations can be mended
    With the proper ploy
    Sometimes it can be drastic
    Others seem unimportant
    But all have their price

    Sometimes the price is small
    It varies with situation
    Usually it is uncertain
    All you can do
    Is weigh your odds

    You can see the stakes
    At least skin deep
    Beyond that, however
    It's a gamble
    All chips in

    Maybe you'll benefit
    Maybe you'll be burned
    You'll soon discover
    If it's the ladder
    Your wounds will heal




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